Thursday, 13 October 2016
WALT:Follow structure of the poem for our own SYNONYMS poem.
I’m talking thrilled !
I’m talking glad!
I’m talking jolly,merry!
I’m talking elated,enchanted!
I’m talking gleeful,joyful!
Wednesday, 12 October 2016
WALT:Write a small paragraph .
My worst day!!
The worst day in my holidays was being in hospital because on Saturday it was my nans 70th Birthday .It was very boring in hospital I had nothing to do.
WALT: Re craft our writing
WILF: Hook Show not tell!!
WHY WHY WHY!!! on the last day of school I’m in hospital WHY before nans 70th birthday I said to my mum she said “it's alright now we no what's wrong with you” “I really wanted to go to school and nans birthday” I said back. I've been in hospital before isn't that good enough I didn't want to end up back in there again, this is really my WORST DAY EVER!!!!!!!!!
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
Tuesday, 3 May 2016
For reading we are learning about the importance of MAKING CONNECTIONS!
Making Connections helps us to link what we already know about the topic to the text...
😄 Text-to-Self connections… Connections to your own life experiences:
NZ sweet yummy slimy rocks paua and cream diving chewy colorful shell delicious strong shell ocean
Text-to- text connections to other books or movies: love nature (sky) kai time life (living (chanel black gold abalone wars (70 sky) marae kai masters my kitchen rules cams kai animal channel
Text-to--world… Connections to what you know about the world or your community.
NZ called paua rest of the world abalone coastlines eat them in all countries limit-quota-protect paua for the future illegal to dive with bottels better the better more in colder rougher waters.
Thursday, 14 April 2016
WALT:Retell a past event.
WILF:Correct sequence of events .
“No school work today, we’re cooking” Miss Wihongi replied excitedly.Yes I thought to myself,I love to cook “Oceayarn” Miss called. I sprinted to the back of the class.
I jammed the smooth blue plastic latex gloves on my hands. I snatched a sharp orange potato peeler from the stack of peelers.I held my red juicy apple in the other hand I began to peel .
Yay!! All the red skin is off.I rushed to chop my apple in half then halved it again.I cored it,I began to slice it into thin pieces.
I dumped my load of apple into the huge silver marae style looking pot.It’s ready to stew.Off to the staffroom we sprinted .
I mix sugar and butter.Then flour it looked like dirty looking breadcrumbs.It was raining breadcrumbs over the stewed mixture .
I shoved the crumble in the hot firey burning oven.It smelt like buttery popcorn hevan.I peeked into the super hot oven.
The bubbles reminded me of when i was drinking fizzy drinks.It’s ready whanau. Haere mai ki te kai Miss Wihongi shouted.I rushed to snatch a colourful bowl and waited for everyone else.I slowly scooped a big mouthful Yummy I thought,what a choice day.